Many of you didn't provide a caption for your collage. Take this seriously. It's an opportunity to learn how to write a complex argument into a soundbite, using visual support.
Many of you didn't list stakeholders. Please provide a long list -- showing me that you know how to analyze the social/political ecology of the issue you are looking at, identifying key stakeholders.
When I ask for supporting links, I would like a really rich set -- showing that you know which organizations are working on the problem (and have supporting webpages), what documentaries have been made, etc.
You need to include in-text citations: at the end of relevant sentences. Like this (Fortun 2008).
Your reference list should include full citations, including author name, title, journal or newspaper, date, etc. Any format is okay so long as you are consistent.
Work on ways to make your presentations more visually accessible and compelling. Subheads often help. Embedding images in your text can be good.
KF's pointers for project